Today I’m thrilled to be able to take my eight from the just-released anthology, Thunder in the Battlefield (vol. 2, Sorcery). My story, The Ruins of St. Louis, combines elements of post-apocalyptic fiction, magic, adventure, a quest, a prophecy, and everything else that makes sword and sorcery kick-butt.
This eight follows notorious smuggler/pirate, thief, fighter, and royal Hunter Mann and the servant Arsin as they’ve just escaped a fight with a mutinous crew and fallen into the acidic waters of the Mississippi, Saved only by a hunk of bowsprit, things are going to get much worse before they get better.
“Behind us,” her companion whispered. Hunter craned her head and fought the shudder. The dark water rippled towards them in a long, steady streak that was wide as she was tall. Hunter held her breath the closer the trail of murky foam got. Tension crept into her every muscle as it drew closer, until it suddenly, abruptly ended at the far end of the bowsprit.
Arsin’s sweating face was tight from sun sickness and muted panic, but he remained frozen, intently scanning the water under them. It was far too dark and filled with muck to see anything that wasn’t right below the surface. Fish had long adapted to live in the water that could kill a human, and there were rumors of other things that lived in the Mississippi’s depths, things that were never seen but spoken of, anyway.
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BEHOLD! the clash of war. Steel upon steel and heroes fighting shield to shield. The only true victory is a brave death and the destruction of your enemies. These stories harken back to a barbaric past that never was. A time when heroic men and women cut glory from the cloth of a sorcery-filled world and stole gold from the hands of the gods themselves. This is fiction that takes no prisoners. No quarter asked. No quarter given.
This is SWORD AND SORCERY.
Edited by James R. Tuck, acclaimed author of the Deacon Chalk Novels, the Sword volume features tales from the following authors:
James R. Tuck
M. B. Weston
S. H. Roddey
Steven S. Long
D. A. Adams
Steven L. Shrewsbury
6 thoughts on “WeWriWa: The Ruins of St. Louis (Thunder on the Battlefield: Sorcery)”
What the hell is it? Nice tension here…you made me nervous!
I could tease and say you have to read to find out…but then again…it all depends on how you feel about gigantic mutant alligator snapping turtle snake monsters, mwahahahaha.
Uh oh, very spooky situation they’re in! Excellent excerpt!
Thank you! 🙂
Very intense scene – great descriptions of the murky water with lurking danger not far below! I recently stayed at a private campground where the lake had extremely large fish with huge teeth. When I learned what damage those fish could do, I quit swimming there! So I totally related to the characters in the water! Nice descriptions – great 8!
Thanks so much! That was one of the scenes that I could see clearly in my head, and admittedly I love that kind of tense moment where you don’t know what’s down there but you know it’s not going to be good. Glad you enjoyed it!