If it’s Sunday there’d better be six! This week’s six sentences come from a WIP about two small town sisters. One just happens to be the mayor and the other is the resident masked hero.
The Six:
Finally, finally Sam closed the laptop and stretched. Her smile was as fake as it was every time she gave a damn speech. “Now then, what can I do for the savior of my fair city?” Alicia’s crimson-gloved fingers curled in irritation. She was tricked out in more armor and special weapons than a freakin’ warlord’s armory and her big sister was grinning like she’d just showed up to work in a Halloween costume. It was only because she’d gotten used to it through the years that Alicia didn’t drag Sam across the table and put her in a rear naked choke hold.
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What a cool premise for a story! And you portrayed sisterly rivalry and love/hate perfectly!
Hi! Yeah I assume the snippet is from Alicia’s POV and I like what you do with that. You must have a sister; I have two and can definitely relate to Sam and Alicia.
I like it! Great setup for what promises to be a cool story — great Six!
Nicely done. Very interesting. Sort of sounds like me and my sister.